Revisions of Your American Dream Drafts

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Let's start with some advice about revising and strengthening a draft. We'll take a look at fiction, non-fiction (essay), and poetry. As we watch, reflect on your own pieces and take these writers' nuggets of wisdom to heart. After all, the adage "Writing is rewriting..." is a true one.

After viewing, choose 1 statement from the 20 listed below and let's discuss what you think. How might you apply this wisdom to your current draft, the workshop, or your writing process? After your workshop, please submit your second (or third or fourth) draft here for credit. Your second (or subsequent) draft should LOOK different (and read better!) for full credit. Along with your draft, please write a short explanation as to what part(s) of your writing you are satisfied with--or not satisfied with--and whether or not you want to or plan to continue working on this piece. Your final working drafts will be collected for your writing portfolio (due at the end of the marking period). Please make sure you indicate the current draft # in your heading!

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Please read the introduction ("My Racist Introduction") & chapters 1-4 (Definitions, Dueling Consciousness, etc.) to begin our class discussion on Race. In the Padlet, please add your thoughts, experiences, or personal definition of racism. You can use a video clip, a link to a webpage, a photo or picture, or your own text. [Make sure your name is on the post to get credit for your participation!]

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